I can't do nothing right any more
So now I'm gonna let you know the score
I'm gonna use this knife
And take my life
Then you'll see what i feel
And what i believe to be real
'Cause in my world
I'm still a school girl
I have parents who love me
Who inside ain't ugly
You use your hate and tighten it around my throat
Then you sit there and wait for me to choke
So now at 14 I'm gonna die
And spread my wings and fly
To the heavens high
Where i can finally sigh
Because of all the shit you put me through
I'm gonna come back and I'm gonna fucking haunt you
You ho bag scum
Your speech smells of rum
I practise with my hateful words to see how deep they cut
You open your mouth to reply, then hear them and snap it shut
Pot luck
'Cause now i don't have to smell your nicotine breath
And you don't have to watch the raising of my chest
'Cause I've sold my soul
I've reached my goal
I finished my story
No more balamory
I'm free from your pain
Yes I've won the game
Because I was slain
At my own hand
Strike up the band
As i walk down the aisle
I ran that mile
You have failed and i have sailed
I hear you wail
as you read this poem in the mail
Down the isle i walk
I hear you all talk
Then in silence you turn to me
But what you see
Isn't as expected
'Cause in my coffin i feel respected
You use to look down at me
Angry demons is all I'd see
But now you don't see me from that angle
Well you don't have a choice
I'm above you I'm an angel
In you head you hear my voice
Your spiteful words have taken their course
And now my soul is full with remorse
And i wont wake
I'll make grown men cry
Because they lie
As do you
Stupid fool
I'll make you regret
Every word you said
You got me so pissed off
My face turned red
And now that anger lead me to be dead
Lead me to my death
And in my final breath
I blurt 'does it hurt?'
But you can't reply
You barely have the energy to cry
You collapse on the floor
Every one runs to the door
No-one cares for you
Because of the shit you put me through
Now who's the bitch?
I got the funeral,
You had the ditch!
xX Sabz Xx
Author notes
Written August 28th, 2005
A contest entry
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Lots of bitterness and hate in this poem. I hope it made you feel better writing it. Sometimes its good to get feelings out with poetry. Quite a dark write.
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amazing work. and good luck in my contest!
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this is so powerful. there are such a variety of emotions. a fantastic write. well done.
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I very much enjoyed reading this! However, not to bash, there are a few things that need to be cleaned up. Several typos and words I think you might have put down, but meant to put something else. Check through it and clean it up would be my only advice, so you get better marks with the judges. Otherwise, well done
If you want to know which corrections I was referring to, you can always message me.
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yeah i did notice a few. if you could just tell meall of them incase there are some i didnt see. thanks...x
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awwww =/ this is very sad I'm sorry this is a very touchful piece full of alot of emotion I am so sorry for your lose
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this made me want to cry
that's a good thing. i can relate to the mother troubles... i can relate to the craziness that is driven. i certainly hope this was a poem of release and not certain action. your life seems much too valuable to me to be strewn about over a less than deserving mother.
hope all is well, dear
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this truly is a beautiful and touching poem, however it is longer than 50 lines so i'm afraid i have to dq it.
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wow
wow i mack me sad
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