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Lovers Touch

Amazing,
how one touch from you
can set me on fire
burn with such love and desire.

Amazing,
how one touch from you
can make me feel weak
and strong at the same time.

Amazing,
how one touch from you
can steal my breath away
and feel wanted with every staggered breath.

Author notes

okay this isnt done yet but its getting there. I wrote this for the love of my life, my boyfriend.
Written August 28th, 2005

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  • Lo Justin
    August 28, 2005
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    This poem is 'amazing'. Nice job.


  • Millie Music
    August 28, 2005
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    special

    voila a magnificent piece and really meaning full i thinks it cos i can relate to it well most of us can when we have some one special,
    i really loved this piece its one for us loved up girls lol,
    love it keep up the hard work,
    love melisa


  • Hawk Feather
    August 28, 2005
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    This poem is beautiful. It's filled with such love, it's well written, and it was a enjoyment to read. It's short, sweet, and to the point. Bravo! Keep up the good work!