Late December, it dawned upon me
As I spoke to him, he suddenly died
Morning fell into night and I sat there
Eating nothing, believing not a single word said
No, I refuse to take in such lies
Tell me, anyone, that I'm inside my worst nightmare
~CT
Author notes
Yay, a Samplette contest! I haven't entered one of these in...a very long time. I got angsty here but I don't think it's dark, dark angst. I haven't seen this word so here I go!
Written August 28th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Acrostic Within Experimentalism by Samplette.
300 points, ended August 30, 2005, 26 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Hello. I quite liked your poem. Yes, I found it a bit angsty, but it's the angst well-justified and you did great by concentrating it into a handful of words that it wasn't at all like angsty rants that I often encounter. Congrats on the trophy
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Thank you very much
~CT -
Thank you very much. I didn't even know I won until I saw your comment
~CT -
Congratulations on your trophy!! Well deserved!
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congratulations on your award truly
a great write
Blessings
FrozenTears -
I know I have wished to be released from many a nightmares...just to be sound in reality. Very nicely done. Thank you for entering, it has been a while since I read you...wonderful as always.
Sam
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