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Liquid Mirror

The water’s surface
A blurred reflection appears
A liquid mirror


Author notes

I am still very new to Haikus, so bare with me!  This poem is inspired by a scene in the movie "Lion King", which I have yet to forget after the past 6 or 7 years since I watched it.  I remember Simba looking into the reflection of the water and seeing his father's reflection.  Watching my reflection against the water's top makes me feel like I am looking into a liquid mirror!  Anyhow, I hope I did alright.
Written August 28th, 2005

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  • PorcelainBelle
    August 29, 2005
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    Pretty poem


  • silverscent gold member
    August 29, 2005
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    Good job. Firstly let me say I know what you mean with the Lion King scene, it makes me feel the same. You did well at showing that in this haiku. I like how you said "blurred reflection" I could really picture the water. Well done!