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Risen (Acrostic)

Rumbling earthquake
Igneous rolled
Soldiers fall down
Enter Jesus
Now we rejoice!

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I thought of a third one!
Written August 27th, 2005

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  • Samplette gold member
    August 29, 2005
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    We can look at the cross as death...or as Life...as loss...or a blessing....as murder...or redeemption..Praise God. This is another beautiful and meaningful acrostic. Thank you for entering.
    Sam


  • PerfectImperfection
    August 27, 2005
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    This is such a very brief acrostic, but with such a powerful meaning... In so few words you have revised so very much! Nice work, and good luck in the contest!~ ~


  • Vickie J
    August 27, 2005
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    Good for you!!! Equally as powerful as your others!