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Nails (Acrostic)

Nightfall's blackness
Above the cross
Inhumes as the
Lord, with forced breath,
Speaks His last words.

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As you probably already know, most of my poems are "religious" by nature.  I hope you like it!
Written August 27th, 2005

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  • Samplette gold member
    August 29, 2005
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    I think is was spiritual by nature...and very beautifully done..
    "It is finished" Three nails....a cross, and the Saviour...allows us to have eternal life just for the asking. Very nicely done. thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam


  • heismysong
    August 27, 2005
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    Thank you...

    I tell ya what- this contest is almost addictive! LOL


  • Vickie J
    August 27, 2005
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    Wow! What a powerful acrostic! Bravo!!!!! Wonderful write!