C an you understand the
H urt we all feel,
R emembering how you made us laugh?
I nside, you must have been in so much pain
S truggling to make us understand
T he conflict of your
O uter joy and inner
P ain.
H ealing takes time, and
E ven though a year has passed, I
R ead the story again every night
K nowing what I know now
I spent countless hours trying to understand
R emembering the smiling face
B ut these things never make sense
Y ou are happier now, I hope
Author notes
In memory of a wonderful person, Christopher Kirby, who died one year ago today.
Written August 27th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Everyone deserves a second chance.. Forgivness is the key to happiness. by xXGoddessofPainXx.
750 points, ended July 25, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Hey also look on the contest page.. I did this for you.. In ond memory of your friend
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Hi i am truly sorry for your loss.. Glad you entered but arcostics are not allowed so sorry.. But im glad you entered..
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Wow...this is an awesome acrostic. It flows naturally and well in spite of the somewhat limiting nature of the device...touching, too. I'm sorry for your loss >_<


