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Springtime Dew

Fragrant rose of white
Petals draped in morning dew
So splendid a sight

Author notes

My first haiku; I write this in honor of a season which fascinates me, and a flower of great beauty which is, so often, the very icon of Springtime, in itself.
Written August 27th, 2005

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  • skinwalker 2
    August 28, 2005
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    applause

    I think it is a very sweet haiku as is the ~Fragrant rose of white~ in my opinion and you need a applause for your first haiku >> Thanks for sharing ~ Skinwalker


  • Black Raevyn
    August 27, 2005
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    Very cool