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Withering Away

Alone, crying beneath the moon,
my heart calls your name.
As the tears stream down my face,
my heart feels empty.
Nowhere in sight,
no one around,
I'm lost

Without you
I'm nothing
You are my reason to live
You are why I breathe each day
You are why I cry at this moment

A lonely heart and empty arms...
A feeling only you can fulfill

Each second you are gone
a piece of me dies
Like a flower,
I slowly wither away
Lying wilted and in despaire crying...
Engulfed in the darkness
of a heartache,
I can no longer feel anything

You were everything
now you are gone...
Gone forever...

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Written August 27th, 2005

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  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    October 21, 2005
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    excellent~

    This poem is filled with anquish and sorrow
    But penned beautiful
    Love n hugs
    Susan~~~


  • poeticweaver gold member
    August 27, 2005
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    Awesome, Emotional Write!

    awe, this is so sad... I'm sure this will touch and relate too many sad souls, and lonely hearts...You have a beautiful way with expressing yourself in poem, I enjoy your works greatly...Thanks for sharing you...Nice work!

    -Timothy The Poetic Weaver