You are beauty my love
The fullness of my heart desire
Kind and loving
A flower of perfection
Flawless to my eye
(You laugh)
(Calling me blind fool)
Nah my love
I see clearly to the heart of the matter
Age will not tarnish your spirit
My eyes see well
The bonds of true love will not be broken
You are my hearts desire
Author notes
Written August 27th, 2005
A contest entry
- Overnight Wonder by CarolDesjarlais.
300 points, ended August 28, 2005, 3 entries
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och,
a sigh wi' many remembered nights in the arms of one....
the sweet truth of this... breathtakeing in it's simplicity...
that love... real love... does on reside on pretty castel walls, but instead fills the ornate hallways of our souls... and that beauty shines through bones and skin.
there is a singer, whom i canna remember at the moment, but has the ring of truth in his words,
'ye can't hide beautiful'
and indeed i agree. aye friend, ye dinna need glasses at all.... you mayhap see things better then she knows... ye ken?
wonderfully penned, but then again, i 'ave no read anything from ye that i diddna like.
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This is very touchingly loyal to a lady admired. Written with great adoration and quite well!~~Suseann
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Awesome poem, it is so nice to see you around here again.
You have been missed
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I like what you've done with the parenthesis. I thought it was the best part of the poem.
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Well done!!!
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