look at the sky and look at the floor
theres so many things you choose to ignore
the clouds move with grace, without fear
pouring out rain representing each tear
the grass in the meadow, so happy so free
seems like each piece symbolizes a part of me
the water in this river is so peaceful and calm
seems like the heart i hold out in my palm
the dirt in the sandbox where we used to play
always brought fun and a smile to her face
the snowball she throws though her hands cold as ice
it echoes the pain she feels though she tries to be nice
the wind blows softly through her straightened hair
seems like so long ago when she didnt care
the sun shines bright reflecting her eyes
forgetting for a little while the times that she cried
the scars that she makes upon her pretty skin
pours out the blood erasing her sins
she uses a tissue to wipe her tears away
then looks in the mirror and feels so ashamed
as she cries she sees the clouds overhead
it drizzles upon her and she smiles instead
she dances around and forgets all her fears
because for each little raindrop she's cried all those tears
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Written August 27th, 2005
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aww hannah! THAT WAS AWESOME! i loved it like omygod! haha i got the pics back! lol well yeah that was off subject haha umm... yeah ive read alot of your poems and i keep saying to myself i need to have something to say when the next big one hits! and i dont your poems are sooo phenomenal that I HAVE NOTHING TO SAY! haha wow you rock i love you!
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aw thank youyou are sooo sweet. i feel bad... all i do on allpoetry is like submit my poems and get offline... soon i will get to reading urs okay? and dont say that i dont have to cause i want to lol
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i cant look into your eyes
if mine are full of tears
wont listen to you words
if my mind wont let me hear
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beautifully sad
ugh..omg where do I begin? um..I Loved this!you always have such an amazing flow!!!I Loved your allusions and personification, very beautiful, somewhat of a hopeful tone b/c it feels like although the past still echoes, she's moved on and become even more beautiful, really amazing, I enjoyed every line!
Ruth
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Iloved this poem, mainly becuase it's like some of the stuff I used to write. I loved the way it was worded and the message behind it. Great job and keep it up!!
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Best I've seen!
GOOD!!!
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