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When You're Not Around..

you say you love me and i know it's true,
i feel the chemistry,
the connection between me and you,
but when you're not around, i can't sleep,
you're missing, my heart craves no beat,
like i'm broken and you're my glue,

come save my soul, repair these wounds,
chase away the tears, the gloom,
light up my heart, light up my life,
be my lover, be my soul,
be the part of me i long for you to be.

you hold me close, so loved, so tight,
its like heaven upon earth,
you'll never let me leave without a fight,
but when you're not around, i can't sleep,
you're missing, my heart craves no beat,
without you my love it just doesn't feel right.

come save my soul, repair these wounds,
chase away the tears the gloom,
light up my heart, light up my life,
be my lover, be my soul,
be the part of me i long for you to be.

save me
love me
forever be true

..save my soul my love



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Written August 27th, 2005

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  • Broken Martyr
    November 4, 2005
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    Here is ur applause


  • Broken Martyr
    November 4, 2005
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    I love This it is rele emotional...
    Keep it up
    Josh -x-
    Edited on Nov 04, 4:20 p.m. because 'I need 2 add aplause'.