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Tears (acrostic)



~They get all of your                      
~Emotions out                              
~Achieving their goal                      
~Ripping your heart up      
~Suddenly, they just      
                                       
     S                                  
    T O          
     P          
                 




Author notes

This is a poem that i wrote because i couldn't stop crying because i woke up all happy and because my brother never helps my mom, my mom got all mad at everyone and started yelling at me and stuff, but now, (hankfully) it's all over!!!
Written August 27th, 2005

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  • St-Rebel
    June 21, 2006
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    wow..this poem is soooo KOOL!! lol.. GOOD JOB **couldnt think of much to say**

  • Alice In Wonderland
    September 24, 2005
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    omg! i thought i commented this!!!! i've read it soooo many times! i love this poem, wow! it's so beautiful. i kno it by heart

  • Dee Dreamer
    August 27, 2005
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    *deedee feels all special cuz riri liked her poem!!!*


  • senza
    August 27, 2005
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    Beautiful Deedee, I loved the last lines they were so nicely penned down...
    Great job!!!

    Lady anairO


  • Kilrah
    August 27, 2005
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    Speechless...I love this poem. Its really nicely done...its great...and so I can go on forever...its really really good

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