it has been cultivated through our genes
social engineering
since history began-
humanity thinks it has all the answers
though never really knowing the questions
we think we have dominion over each other
over all the animals
and over land-
who watches the watchers
and who watches them?
there can be no blind faith in anything in humanity
we are all just a bunch a liars
it saddens me
and sickens me-
all we do is destroy
all we do is destroy
no human has ever gone to heaven
all we do is destroy
no human will ever go to heaven
all we do is destroy!
we need to learn to live with each other
everyone must learn all languages
see all points
don't let your self be limited just to where your at
or where you think you wanna go
speak aloud with your hands
we must wake up from this mass hallucinated dream
we don't even know ourselves
all we do is destroy
all we do is destroy
no human has ever gone to heaven
all we do is destroy
no human will ever go to heaven
all we do is destroy!
Author notes
Personal Hell
by TheDrip
Written August 27th, 2005
A contest entry
- What's Next? by kaybeard.
300 points, ended August 29, 2005, 4 entries
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Comments
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This is a really original piece which is great! I love the imagery you used in this work! I agree with DarknessFleeting, your work is very thought provoking, which I love about it! I like how you repeat the last line, it helps it to "stick in the mind"!
Great write and good luck!
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good write
I think you definitely have something here. I agree with alot of what you said and your words were very thought provoking. I don't know really what to believe because it seems as though everything is so uncertain, but you have a very convincing argument.
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