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Seen, yet Not

~ Invisible ~

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Written August 27th, 2005

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  • Dreamer09
    September 1, 2005
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    ya it can be, i am working on being seen. There's one person that has always seen me, but.... he is no loner living so i don't know what is going to happen. I'll take it step by step, thanks for the comment.
    ~Kelsey


  • leander Moderators member
    September 1, 2005
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    Being invisible... sometimes it could come in handy, but being it forever... must be a lonely life now I think about it...


    Leander