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Thine Heart Unspoken

Ambition.

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An unspoken heart will veil one's own dreams.  Their heart and soul pleas to the outside world to break free ... they are overcome with an ambition of dreams left unfulfilled.
Written August 27th, 2005

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  • leander Moderators member
    September 1, 2005
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    If you ever want to get somewhere in life, then you indeed have to have a lot of ambition to get there... it won't be thrown at you, you have to work for something... great picked word!

    Leander


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    August 27, 2005
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    excellent

    very nice action word!

  • St-Rebel
    August 27, 2005
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    ooo nice strong word GOOD JOb