I knew the way you felt all along,
But I still gripped to unrequited hope,
I set myself up on a delusion of love,
For you to bring the knife and slice the rope.
Though the present couldn't hold my dreams,
I prayed the future would let me try,
But the reaper of fate had his word,
For me to vent, to hide, to cry.
Still I feel the world is never ending,
Though you go on in vain,
You've handed me the jokers card,
Let me deal the pack again.
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Written August 27th, 2005
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this would make an amazing song by the way!
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nonono dotn get so upset- feelings have to be and i know u feel like shit but nice way of lettign it out and this poem rocked
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woow! there is some amazing rhyming in there!...wow.....brilliant poem...vxxxx
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AMAZING poem. Way to vent!
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i love the last stanza 
Tis awesome 
The whole poem is awesome, well done 
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