Laying my head on a tear drenched pillow gets old after a while
My checks are red from all the tears i have wiped away
Every night it gets harder and harder to sleep
Every night more and more sadness fills my dreams
Thoughts of all the imperfections on me
I never thought one person could have so many flaws
And my point is proven with every guy that comes along
It feels like there's no escape and i have almost reached my breaking point
There isn't to much more i can take
I hate feeling this way
But the way its looking, that feeling isn't going away
Author notes
just some thoughts i threw down.
Written August 26th, 2005
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awwww casey i loved it even though it has been a while scince i have read it
love ya bunches
chels
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I LOVE THIS POEM!! it says a lot. everyone has flaws and sometimes they just bring you down...i know what thats like... and yes crying gets old but you keep crying because you feel so down it does it get old i do know that for sure!
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Awhhh, I really feel the emotion in this poem. Greadt job. I can't wait til school starts. I miss you bunchs. XOXOX. ♥
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this was really good hunny.. i can deffinatly relate to this.. great great job.. xoxo stac
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Very sad thoughts you have Casey, though... even the most precious of gems have flaws. Let them compliment you, not define you. Then, slowly... the tears you cry will cease to exist. Very interesting work here.
Your friend,
Prince
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