Running through your life, like a fast moving flame,
So much living, the girl is so hard to tame.
Catching you unaware with her smouldering look,
Under her magic, she can read you like a book.
She can torch your heart, and burn you to the ground,
You will do anything for her, you are spell bound.
With just a touch she can ignite your fire,
Leaving you scorched with moulten desire.
I know you love deeply and will never learn,
Careful with your love, or you might get a burn.
Her emotions are ablaze, she can light up the sky,
Don't toy with her heart, she can make a grown man cry.
Author notes
Written August 26th, 2005
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A contest entry
- Pre-Write Extravaganza 3/ rhyme only by piccola.
600 points, ended October 12, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I can visualize a fast burning fire ... the flames destroying everything in their path as they make their way toward a specific object...tongues of flame ... thank you for entering.
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This was really good, and I enjoyed the flow and story behind it, as well. I think you did a good job on showing how an independent and cool woman controls herself.
Good luck in my contest! -
Hey, you wrote this on my birthday
I'll return later with a proper comment
Dee
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she sounds like quite a woman to contend with!
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Beautiful, and working with the whole women power thing. Fabulously written, i really enjoyed this. As always a great write.
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