This is where I'm at,
I don't take no Smack.
People try to push me around,
I ain't no clown.
I've had it,
You need to sit,
Why you think you can talk to me like that?
Just cause I'm a little fat.
I'm a lady baby,
You don't have to date me.
Just step off a little,
I didn't say shit to you when you were rappin you stupid riddle.
I don't care how long we've been together,
Why you think your better?
We the same,
This ain't no game.
This is life,
I don't want to be your wife.
I should tell you by,
with yourself always getting high.
We may have kid's,
But I'm not something you just did.
If you ain't feeling me anymore,
Get of that damn floor.
and step out of my face,
cause in my heart you ain't got no place.
Author notes
Written August 26th, 2005
A contest entry
- The Dark, The Sad, And Love... Give me Your All by concreteangel69.
300 points, ended August 27, 2005, 10 entries
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Very good
I like this. It sounds like the Steph I use to know. Love ya mom -
This was very strong some spots had a few words miss spelled but other than that I really enjoyed this poem great work I am not sure if the contest is still open if it is good luck lots of love Robin...aka SH
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Great poem !!!!!! Go getem girl!!!!!!!!!! lol
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hey that was alsome with a little bit of work it could be a song but as a poem it was fantastic super great you did a really good job on it you told how you felt and it came out good you wrote it from your heart no your head cause real oetry come's from the heart not the head well it was alsome I loved it it had a good start and good finish it was alsome keep writing cause you got some skill well good luck and god bless
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kick ass!!!!!
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Tell him!!!
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This sound more like a hardcore rap. I like the flavor. I think it is also a marvelous piece as well. Keep up the great work and thank you for sharing it. God bless you
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