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My VampiressAngel


My darkest of angels
who came from the day
then into the night
is now my grand-angel
of darkened delight.

Amid the upheaval
and turmoil she found
her place was still with me
but moving around.

So to keep in touch with her,
one angel of three
on my favorites list
she must properly be.

I do visit her writes
to be touched and inspired
for my darkest of angels is there
when my muse is tired.

Besides, she finally spelled
my name right on her page-
what higher honor could there be
for this wise old sage?!

So as for the question
why she's on my list,
I've answered it straightfoward
and yet with a twist...

For that's where she finds herself
in this family upheaval
and wherever my dark angel lands-
she's on my list for retrieval!


Dedicated to my AP daughter, VampiressAngel, who visited my page 
and found that she is now my AP granddaughter,
and who's daughter is now her aunt,
and who's mother could soon become her sister,
and who is very shocked and confused by all this right now, and rightly so-
lucky she has four mothers!

Author notes

Dedicated to my AP daughter, now AP granddaughter, VampiressAngel (formerly Gothic Angel) (and just plain Di!)
Written August 26th, 2005

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  • vampira1665 silver member
    November 7, 2005
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    Whoa, that was pretty but confusing. I had a grampa that married his aunt and became his own uncle.

    Hugs and bites, Your Partner in Death


  • FallingSideways silver member
    August 27, 2005
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    Wow...what a crazy lineage we have here
    Regardless of how you dub us, I am just thrilled to know you are there
    -one of your daughters...I think


  • wbiro gold member
    August 27, 2005
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    Well, my darkest angel, I will formally ask (beg?!!) Jess, I'm sure she won't mind having you for a sis!
    your dad!


  • Scarlet Ambrosia
    August 27, 2005
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    My my my ,, ....... im am shock!
    I love the explanation you have there..... can u still be my daddy pweeseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.....i dont mind loosing a mama I got four of them... lol
    but i dontr have anAP dad.....so pweese can i still be youre ap daughter Love the entry by the way and good luck in the contest
    Angel

  • wbiro gold member
    August 27, 2005
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    Arkansas! Yes, suseann, this is just what it must be like! lol Thanks for leaving a comment, good to hear from you!
    me from vacationland!


  • suseann
    August 27, 2005
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    What town in Arkansas is this A.P.family from again? Just kidding of course. Aah! Papason is a good father to his vampire daughter.~~Suseann

  • wbiro gold member
    August 26, 2005
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    Thank you, moon! I only hope she feels the same- I don't know if you caught what was in the author's comments, but she has just had quite the shock!
    soon to be getting back at you when things settle down here!


  • Celticmoon
    August 26, 2005
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    Oh now this was truly a lovely write. Full of warmth and love from the first word to the last. No better a way to express emotions felt so deep than to write a piece such as this.


    Wonderful Write!!


    Blessings
    celticmoon


  • SexyAngel0418
    August 26, 2005
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    lol... This is a great poem... You did a great job on this one Gramps!!! I really like this!!! Good luck in the contest!!! (That for some reason I didn't see)... lol

    Hugs,
    Beth

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