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My Love

My love

Maybe we'll meet again
Maybe as two angels
Somewhere in Heaven
Or in another life

My love

Maybe we'll be happy again
Maybe we'll grow old
Like it was suppose to be
Or die young together

My love


Author notes

Okay, there is no ending. I don't know how to end it right. Or if it can be ended right. Its my first love poem about someone other than Nick Carter. I know I said I would never write another love poem but......here it is.
Written August 26th, 2005

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  • swimsuit issue
    September 19, 2005
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    I love the simplicity this poem displays yet the depth it obtains. An emotion most experience in their life. This is truly beautiful. Keep it up!!

    -Lindsay

  • will-bob
    August 31, 2005
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    i think you should leave it my love.......i mean the two stanzas did their job.....lots of punch from a little puch.....good job .....and great write .....i know how it feels....


  • Paint Me Beautiful
    August 26, 2005
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    I agree with prince...that would be a beautiful ending.


  • forty-one
    August 26, 2005
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    Maybe we'll melt away
    like winter snow(sometimes it
    does snow in April), and the tears
    we cry will nurture the land...
    turning emptiness into something
    beautiful!

    How's that for an ending? I hope you like it. The best way to write a love poem, is to write what you feel in your heart.

    Prince