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How?

You make me hate what I used to love and love what I used to hate.
How?
How do you do it?

You make me laugh when the clouds are frowning.
You keep me warm on walks through the angry rain.
How?
How do you do it?

You have me hanging on your every last word.
I am always yearning for the next time I see you.
How?
How do you do it?

You've filled me with mysterious, everlasting -magical- happiness.
You are my prince, my hero, my wizard.

How?
How do you do this to me?

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Written August 26th, 2005

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  • blondone
    May 8, 2006
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    this is a real nice write, sounds like love to me !!! great imagery words flowed with ease just all around great show of poetry


  • James R
    October 1, 2005
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    Very nice write. orignal I enojoyed it alot.