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Forever Lord

When first you came to be
The Lord forever over me
I knew from that day on
No more would life be the same
The world behind
And only you before me
You tell me this
No matter what comes your way
I'm here to stay

Forever Lord, you will be
Forever Lord, you're right beside of me
Forever Lord, I will love you
Because you first loved me

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Written August 14th, 2001

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  • cedricthepirate
    August 25, 2005
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    great job

    so truthful, overall its a good poem, probably would make for some good lyrics if it was a bit longer too, great job, i hope to read more sometime.


  • Emperor MAR
    August 25, 2005
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    Emperor MAR quality.

    Jesus always being with me is one of my fav things about Him.