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Rêver

I still ask myself what happened,
even though I know the answer.

I have to wonder what I could have done to keep us together
Even though I know it wasn't my fault.

I don't know what this feeling I call "love" really is
Whether I've fallen over or am falling forever,

But I do know
That I've never felt it for anyone
As strongly
As with you.

I keep hoping against hope
That the girl who likes girls
Could love a boy like me

Why do you think I've stayed this close?

I had a dream for us, once.
I keep seeing it over and over again.

I don't care about what you are.
I had a dream for us long ago,

And my greatest wish is to make that come true.

Come face the world with me, please...



I don't want to do it alone.

Author notes

The title of this means "to dream" in French. This was originally going to be a much different piece, but it turned out badly... so I wrote this instead. Hope ye likes it, this is a true story and a true feeling.
Written August 25th, 2005

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  • dEaRaMbELLiNa
    August 26, 2005
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    Awwwww Morgan, if she can't see how much you love her than she's not good enough... There's got to be someone better out there for you...

  • afterdark
    August 26, 2005
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    <33333333333333 Stay in there, darling.
    <3rika