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Men Don't Get It

The first time I saw you
I could tell what you wanted
You looked me up and down
Like somthing to be hunted

I thought you were cute
But I was definintly not interested
Untill one day after class
You followed and I led

I was apalled by your gesture
As sweet as it may have been
To try and walk with me
And become my special friend

As we came to a parting
You leaned in to ask me
To go out with you
But I retorted that we never could be

I knew that I needed
To get closer to God
And that dating you
Was not my job

So that summer
I went to find the
King of all Kings
And let him reside in me

I learned to love him
And promised I'd never let go
My heart was now full
And let out a warm glow

......tbc







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Written August 25th, 2005

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  • Godsbabygurl
    August 31, 2005
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    um...okay? kinda harsh don't ya think? whatever i'm laavin this flippin website anyways, nobody posts anymore, and when i just try to post, i get hypocritical remarks...okay? we are so over Amalie*leaves in a big huff*





  • cannilickureye
    August 30, 2005
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    um, okay. not your best...you were telling it like it is, which is why it's not the best.

    because it isnt the best it could be better.


    whatever.
    <3 amalie