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Always Be There

Lord you see
her tears that fall
the pain that she hides
her soft quiet call

She puts on her mask
for her wonderful son
and tries to hide it
because she loves him a ton

but Lord I know
she needs you
she has no one that she can
always truly turn to

She needs to know
that you will always be there
always to help her,
to love and to care

Lord be with her in this tough time
please Lord bring her through
draw her closer, so much closer
so she can see that all she needs you

Author notes

this is about my cousin who husband died awhile ago and i don't know if she's a Christian and she's got some problems like she took up smoking again and i think she's been anorexic so please pray for her and her 3 year old son that the Lord will draw them to him and help them through this.
Written August 25th, 2005

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  • beebee2003
    September 15, 2005
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    She needs to know
    that you will always be there
    always to help her,
    to love and to care

    my favorite part...great write, i love the rhyming, your good at it
    -beth

  • smileygurl
    September 2, 2005
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    CONGRATS!!! You won the gold trophy!! Awesome!! I knew you were gunna win!!


  • Samplette gold member
    September 2, 2005
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    We need to pray for her soul. For her to Heed His love and call. I pray now, in the Name of Jesus, for Him to convict her heart, that she seek Him for peace and healing. In Jesus Name. Once she puts her trust in the Lord, everything else will fall into place. Thank you for sharing this with us.
    Sam

  • smileygurl
    August 26, 2005
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    Awesome poem! I will pray for your cousin and her son! That is so depressing! Good luck in the contest! You are so gunna win!