Tar

I've watched you for a while;
Studied from afar
When you give that smile,
My brain just turns to tar.

My heart jumps when I hear your name,
And with my blood, runs adrenaline
I can't say I hate this game,
And you've seen all the places I've said I've been.

Author notes

It's a bit all over, but I thought it up at midnight and couldn't remember it word for word when I quickly jotted it down in the back of my journal. I love the idea that the last line gives...but it doesn't really seem to fit. Also, The word adrenaline is too big to fit there... It's very sad.

All in all, I think that the second stanza is a bit messy, but I like all the images it gives and maybe one day, I'll think of a brilliant way to fix it up...

(Instead of pronouncing "been" in the last line like "bean", pronounce it "bin"...then it rhymes...)
Written August 25th, 2005