I love so many people
I love all my family
my little sister
my Mum and Dad
I love my friends
and I love my bird
I love life
and I love playing sport
My life is filled with love
I know one day
I will meet a person
who will be a special love
I have not found him yet
but our time will come
when I feel lost without him
when life is him
when dreams are him
when days and nights are wrapped
in him
Until then
I shall wait patiently
and look forward to the day
he walks into my life
Author notes
Written August 25th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- I'm back!!!(and real excited!) by hot babe30.
300 points, ended August 25, 2005, 3 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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This is such a beautiful poem. I saw it in the spotlight and just had to read it then leave a comment. I like the way you described how the love of your life will make you feel. It reminds me how my girlfriend makes me feel. Thank you for sharing this poem. It was wonderfully written and an engaging read.
-Steve-
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I like.
This is a sweet simple poem about something simple as love, yet its so complicated isnt it?
I like it
I know how it feels
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This is simple and sweet, and a delight to read. I wish you every happiness in life. Take care
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Wow that was fantasticly wonderful. You have a great sense in poetry. COntinue on what your doing and you may become famous.
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I loved it. You don't need no criticism. You don't need to revise it. Its perfect the way it is. Your wonderful at writing poetry. Two thumbs on that one. Keep going on your awesome poetry.
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A very lovely and simple representation of your feelings. This poem give me a warm feeling inside even though I'm not one of the people you love, haha. Nice to see this ray of sunshine when a lot of poetry is dark and grey
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Right to the point, very simple but non the less beautiful. Good penning and good luck in your contest.
Des -
Simple
I love the simplicity of this poem, very good.
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you nearly made me cry! beautiful x
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wonderful
beautiful and simple, i hope he is all your dreams come true ............
thanks for sharing
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I like the start, it is simple and free of angst. However, it then changes focus. I was hoping that the poem would remain upbeat and about the beauty of love itself.
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People who love each other deeply always find each other...even if it takes a while it's always worth it..very nice write
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That was really lovely. A delight to read. Well done!
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That was so touching. Thank you for sharing your work and keep up the great writes!
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Excellent job! I really enjoy this one. I know how you feel. Your words paint pictures of hope in my mind. I know you will find your perfect prince.
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A wonderful write, you expressed emotion very vert well. I truely hope you can hold on to these feelings when life grabs your heart.
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AWESOME
This, my friend, has the makings of a true masterpiece. Almost brought a tear to my eye. You do seem like someone who is happy with everything and everyone in her life. Awesome write from someone who is an awesome writer. Keep the ink flowing, hon. Love and hugs...
~Donna~ -
thankyou for my points that was very kind of you even when I didn't get a place. ??
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awe this is so sweet...loving everybody in your life....God I wish I could say that....I do love those close to me..cant say I love everything and everyone....but this poem rings in my mind just someone happy and in anticipations of love promising...how quaint and graceful...very lovely write and just be patient...you have lots of time...
Huggs
Malabu -
this was good
good luck
much luv,
aby -
excellent
This poem has deep and very sensible depth to it. You certainly have your head screwed on right. You sound really bright. Your family should be your first love at your age. You will find your prince in the right time.
Hugs
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