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Words from an Open Mind pt.8

Missing image
lovers walk
hand in hand
in the sands
of my dreams

come to me
let it be
that this
is the love you seek

time will tell
what is real
and what
is make believe

the truth
be known
it’s not what you say
but what you feel

take a chance
don’t look back
I am here
take my hand


~ ~


words they flow
thru out the mind
with patches
of grays in between

longing to tell you stories
of times long ago
where love was in plenty
and many stars shown above

kiss me softly
and you will see
the pictures in a story
of lovers upon a screen


~ ~


can you hear the whispers
of the owl in the night
singing to your senses
just as you turn out the light

can you hear the wind
caressing against your windowpane
telling you he wants in
to slip in out of the rain

can you hear my tears
as they fall for you
wanting to feel you near
wanting to say I love you

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Written August 25th, 2005

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  • owlishhunter
    January 4, 2008

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    What a lovely poem written with powerful undertones...a tru testament to the talent you possess, my love! Fantastic to say the least!


  • Sharon Corr gold member
    September 5, 2005
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    Brilliance TRUE GOLD

    vampira1665
    Your love is a treat alive sweet,
    I wish the best for you I really do
    Every time I feel you, I fall into a deep trance
    You share a magical mystical way to charm all of us today and yesterday
    I love everything you do; you're a giving white dove of pure beauty
    I fall deeply into your past life dreams
    It is going to take me awhile to catch up with you
    Many Blessings to you and yours, this poem flows in exquisite rains of beauty
    I am left breathless on your golden pages the words of a mystic prophet sage!
    You’re in a league all your own as I dance with your heart by wind and sea!
    Namaste Blessed Be. Found love in your dreamers dream.


  • bird-mad girl
    August 27, 2005
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    The imagary in this piece blew my mind away. It was so beautiful. I got lost in your words that are just flowing around me. Wow. It was such an enchanting piece you have.
    Much love

    Always and Forever,
    ~Kendal


  • vampira1665 silver member
    August 26, 2005
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    I like everyone, man and woman. Reach out anytime.


  • Fairy Moon
    August 26, 2005
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    Wow! I almost want to reach out for your hand. But probably not a good idea for I am a woman. Great write I loved it. ~~Shannon~~


  • Vampirehelex
    August 25, 2005
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    great

    You alwaqys write so lovely. Its nice to see your poems again. Its been a while since i last read your stuff. As always beautiful and deep.


  • Theater Of Dreams
    August 25, 2005
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    ENCHANTING...

    OMG...exquisite. Absolutely my ABSOLUTE FAVORITE poem by you sweety! Brilliantly written and so passionate and precious...love described by the soul of a woman just put's me in a TRANCE. The image...I WANT IT!!!! Just superb. Frame it.


  • robert bolin
    August 25, 2005
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    I love the beautiful images through out the poem and the picture you used to fit the poem of the godess and the dove
    Gives your poem the power of heart felt inigma of your soul
    purity and brilliance leaving the human brain in awe brilliantly
    written brillianty painted and brlliantly put together like a waterfall of the heart

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