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Awaiting their Prince

Missing image
Pictured waiting with dignity
for the arrival of Royalty,
with eloquence and child-like
virgin appearance so carefree.

Magnificent they look seated
proper manners slightly pristine.
To dream of memories so joyous
so loving they feel very blessed.

Gentle are the hearts embrace
enraptured with longings of love.
Fate awaits a timeless meeting
of a Prince in his Royal chaise.

Untouched by time momentarily
breath-taking is their beauty.
Destiny awaits one maiden
as the Prince chooses duly.

Who will be his regal Princess
to stand by his side when he reigns?
enclosed in a world of brilliance
live a life of luxury so wondrous.

Jennifer
August 25th 2005


Author notes

John Singer Sargent painting
regal  eloquence  pristine  brilliance  magnificent  untouched  joyous  waiting  child-like  timeless
memories  royalty  proper  virgin  loving  gentle
breathe-taking  destiny  dream  pictured momentarily
embrace  enraptured dignity.
Written August 25th, 2005

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  • eternalpoet
    September 3, 2005
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    4 stars ****

    ooo.. so u see paintings too .. well. u cud have added my pic here and said u painted it for me

    coming to this write.. umm. this is cool... i now how difficult it is to make poems from pics.. .. i tried once.. ..lol

    nice write.. good work.. thanks for sharing

    hugs and kisses for his pluff pluff spongey doll

    gives choco

    take cares and have a nice time my dear friend.............. just keep it up............. your humble little friend.......... ........ ................ ............... - vic ( who else????? )


  • Sanya
    August 26, 2005
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    lovely

    That is really beautiful. You have really inspired me. Good luck in the contest


  • jenelda silver member
    August 26, 2005
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    Thank you Herman, it was a real challenge which I love to do

    Jenn


  • Prince Charming
    August 26, 2005
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    Oh how wonderful I love those stories. Knights, princes and kings they made such wonderful tales. You did really fantastic with that. So much beauty and style in this write Fantastic done Hugs Herman