revulsion, hate
all your mind revolves around these feelings
how can you love when you don't comprehend
love itself
hate me, fine
hurt me
but in the end
it's you who doesn't understand
your problem,
one who can't accept differences in others
maybe you'll make me fear each day
but perhaps someday you'll know
understand
how wrong, misguided you were
if you wish to belong to everyone else
do what they do,
never spread your wings,
in the end
it's your life that will be wasted,
no matter how much i hurt
you can't make me crawl
my body may break but you can't touch my mind
fear and pain won't break me
because ones such as you
ruin this world
so here is my wish
if there is any way, means to do this
I would have you born as I
then....
we'll see how you feel
judging others for genetic differences
makes you less than human
good luck with your life
Author notes
....weirdness, but i needed to say something
Written August 25th, 2005
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I couldn't agree more. Don't ever let anyone keep you down.
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awesome!
nice portrayal of inner strength and power, i really like it. the tone was very strong and forceful. i like the flow from speaking to the readers about thierselves to talking about you and how you feel. that is really good. people do need to learn wise judgement, but thats human nature for you. good job! i like it! -
i love this!!! it was really awesome! everything just spoke to me. i love this! i have to go, but i'll come back and finish my comment.
-Kevin
*blessed be*
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thanks
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thanku
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Amazing write yet agine!
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Kick Ass!!!!
Go you!
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this is brilliant, i can relate to this so easily, i know exactly wot u mean, i have said this to people so many times but in my own way, i've never seen it written so well, all these words are meaningful, this is really gd well written
-XxoxX-
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