I am dancing with
sound waves from old piano.
Keyboard filled with love.
Author notes
All my life music was part of my soul, especialy piano. I like Bethoven, Mozzart, Vivaldi, Dvorzak, Musorgski...
Written August 25th, 2005
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When one loves to play the piano it feels sometimes as if they are dancing with it - the music stirs up emotions and one enjoys this time alone with the instrument. More than just practicing, this is a joy to do. Liked the haiku you have penned here.
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Great!
One word is enough
I can say it like pianist ;}
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Thank you dame de la riviere. It was a real touching experiance for me.
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bon chance
well going by your author's comment you've got great taste in music. the poems nice and concise. thank you for entering. peace be with you. -
Poetry, music, dancing, painting, always were part of my life...
And you can always try...It doesn't matter how old you are. If that is only for your pleasure, you will be satisfied. People must do the things what makes them happy, of course if that do not hurt the others...
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I always wanted to play the piano, but my parents thought something different about that... and unfortunately I'm too old to start that now
beautiful image you have here thank you for entering this one too
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Thank you CoolOasis.
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beautiful poem Sonja, very nicely written bravo! keep up the great haiku work
best wishes as always
-Cool Oasis-
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Thank you dianabluelove. I wrote it from the same reason.
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This short poem is wonderful. I love music, and piano, and... other stuff related to that! Nice way of saying it.
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Interesting
Short and simple, to be sure. A little broken in wording and quite minimal in words, but that's fine. I do, however, wonder how you can be dancing AND playing a piano. As far as I know, a piano is a little big to be dancing with...unlike something like a flute... -
Thanks rose
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awesome
Great.....another haiku in my contest! And very well written! I love haiku a lot, especially when they're so well written. Best of luck in the contest, and keep up the great work! -
Thank you Samplette. I am glad that this poems reminds you about nice spent time.
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This is very soothing. When I went to visit with my son and his wife in July...he played the piano and sung for me...Oh...that was a time I shall never forget.
Beautiful, best wishes in the contest.
Sam
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Thank you Wendy. I am glad that my readers are satisfied with this so simple and honest poem. Thank you fro your good wishes
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Ahhhh..... this is gorgeous, such simplicity, yet you can feel the movement in this. Very well done, enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest.
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take the s off of sound and its perfect.
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Thanks Amy. Poetry and love don't need too much words...
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You have captured a very nicely written poem.. that though only a few words... says quite a lot.. very nicely done my dear friend.. good luck in the contest with this entry
Amy
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Yes, this is haiku with soft piano sound. Thank you for your very nice comment and good wishes
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Dance to the music. FINALLY! A poem that goes with the background! I am definetly impressed. I enjoyed this. Was this a haiku? Nicely done. I play the piano also but I also dance.. anywayz rolling eyes YOUR poem was nice and you did good. I think you should win the contest! Best of luck!
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As a piano player, this truly touched my heart in a very special way. Thank you for sharing such a very special piece of your heart and your life here with us. Excellent.
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Thanks Frog for your honest and nice wishes
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Thank you for entering this contest! This is a lovely, short but very nice poem. The sounds that come from talented hands on a piano are truly magical! Good Luck and best wishes! ~Frog~
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Thank you Frozen - Tears. I hope that some sweet, touching music would be able to defrost your tears
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Thank you Blaze. I am glad that you can hear this melody...
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Thank you for entering I love piano
and sometimes when Im down I put in a cd
of all piano music. what a lovely uplifting thought
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I can hear the sweet melody acoss the vast ocean that separates the player and the listener lovely write once again sonja
LOve and light
blaze
P.S. I am working on that write but a tough subject for some reason
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Thank you raspberry. You are always welcome to my site.
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Thanks to your contest.. else i would have missed this lovely sweet little piece here.. It is always difficult to express beauty in short verse.. u have captured that art here !! Well done .
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As I said, I love music. It is a passion. I liked to dance whenever that was posible.
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excellent
Short and sweet. Sounding free and happy. I liked the simple structure of the words. So few words saying so much. -
Thank you mistic
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awesome
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Thank you. Thank you for your dance company offer. I have to take a look into my dance notebook to find a free place.
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Dance on and onSonja!
And I will dance with you the dance of precious love.The notes are soft the air is warm and the brush of lips on bare arm evokes a time of beauty and charm.!
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