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Waking up



Smells of morning coffee.
The scents of your skin, sandalwood.
Your fingertips’
soft touch.
Chocolate marks
round your lips.
With closed eyes
I can see your smile,
bewitching me with
strawberries jam
and bread crumbs upon my breasts.
Enchanted
with your thick morning voice.
Your recently shaved chin
on my shoulder.
Your kiss
on my neck.
Morning love.

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Written August 25th, 2005

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  • Sonja
    July 10
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    Do you want a truth? I do not like coffee like most of people do. Some fresh juice is ma favorite. Coffee it is here only to give a poem its poetical voice...lol... yes, the other things is what I like.


  • individuality gold member
    July 10

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    ah as others love cofee it is someting that does not agree with me physically, i thin i am allergic to it ofr whenever i have tried it it makes me pyhsically sick that aside though... well i have no c0omplaints lols food and kisses sign me up


  • Sonja
    December 20, 2005
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    Thank you fairmaiden1.
    ~Sonja~

  • fairmaiden1
    December 20, 2005
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    Awww very intimate and sweet. Nice breakfast too! Good job!

  • Sonja
    December 5, 2005
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    Thank you Steph for reading and understanding my poetry. I am glad you like it. Also, thank you for your good wishes.
    ~Sonja~


  • Krispy Kreme
    December 4, 2005
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    Nice piece! The detail you've used through this piece is quite intense, with the emotions and sensual side aswell. Good luck in the contest
    ~ Steph ~


  • Sonja
    November 12, 2005
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    Thank you my dear dragon. Yes, it is, it is full of love. I am glad you like it.
    ~Sonja~


  • bookdragon
    November 11, 2005
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    I loved this. It was so intiment, so sensual yet loving. The flavors and smells of love!


  • Sonja
    September 22, 2005
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    Thank you Betty

  • Betty Rickard
    September 22, 2005
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    Beautiful

    Beautiful write..Written so well..Good luck in the contest.
    Blessings,
    Betty


  • Dragonsong silver member
    September 14, 2005
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    OOOH... what I would give to wake up to this in the morning! This has the imagination running wild with possibilities


  • Sonja
    September 11, 2005
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    Yes, it was very delicious. Thank you.


  • tanzanite
    September 10, 2005
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    Delicious breakfast. Lovely way to wake up. I would like being woken up like this. Thank you for this lovely entry into my contest - I really cannot think of a better way to start a day ....


  • Sonja
    August 25, 2005
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    Yes, breakfast lol.. Thank you for your nice and sweet comment.

  • Buchan
    August 25, 2005
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    excellent

    True words of love. It made me want breakfast again. Awaking to many physical and emotional feelings. This is so descriptive and warm.. It has an indepth feeling of a love and tenderness.All being observed within a life. I found the poem
    a read of great importance,saying so much. Very well done.


  • Sonja
    August 25, 2005
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    Thank you mistic. I am glad that you like it.


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    August 25, 2005
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    good job

    very nice,sweet as can be, romantic love them


  • Sonja
    August 25, 2005
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    Thank you stolen... Thanks for your good wishes


  • Abscessed
    August 25, 2005
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    ahhh this was amazing *wisful sigh
    how i wish these moments would come back.
    youve captured this so beautifully. best of luck in the contest!! im in it too heehee

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