give me a tune and i'll sing you a song
give me a grin and i'll give you a smile
give me a giggle and i'll give you a laugh
give me your broken heart and i will mend it
give me your thoughts and i will understand them
give me your pain and i will carry it
give me everything and i will love you forever
i'll give you a song if i hear a tune
i'll give you a smile if you give me a grin
i'll return to you a laugh if you give me a giggle
i'll mend all of your broken hearts if that's what i receive
i will understand and of your bunched up thoughts
i will carry all of your pains and your fears
i will love you forever if i have your everything
fake a tune and i shall frown
fake a grin and i will morn
fake your giggles as i fake my own laughs
lie about your broken hearts and i will break you even more
lie about your thoughts and i shall play the game of tricks
fake your pain and i will cause more
give me a lie about yourself and i will hate you forever
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don't hate me because it sucks
Written August 24th, 2005
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Wow, i don't know how you think that this poem sucks. I liked it alot. It really seems to portray the message : be real, or be hated. And thats a great message. I really enjoyed reading this and i think (know) that you should stop being so hard on yourself. You do have talent and no true artist loves all their own work. But you know that i love it.
Be real,
JOE -
I dont think this sucked at all...actually I thought it was great. You made it seem like this is how you want a friendship to be...maybe thats not what you meant to write about...but thats what i got out of it...great job
-Katie
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