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I know you care....Somewhere

You sleep with me
On the floor of your room
When your body is next to mine i never want the time to come for you to wake

I wish we could just lay there talking, wrestling, massaging all hours of the day
I wish you could grab me and hold me the way you do as i fall deep asleep every night
I wish you could just let go and let me be yours
I wish you would kiss me like you used to
I wish you weren't afraid

I know you care for me
No matter how hard you try to hide it at times
When you hold me in the night
Your true feelings show through
The innocence of the nights we've spent together
Shows me that you respect me and i'm not just something you think can be thrown away

I just wish i knew what was holding you back
I just wish i could change it somehow and have us be together
I just wish you could  hold me forever
No one else compares
I wish i knew you thought the same
That no one could compare to me in your eyes or heart
Sadly i know this isn't true
But for some strange reason i can't keep my heart away from you

Reason is i know you do care...somewhere deep down....you care

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Written August 24th, 2005

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  • Virety Enten
    September 21, 2005
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    AWWW sweety, has he read this?