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Where Did You Go?

Your gone to me now
no longer hugging me freely
just telling me I'm beautiful
and no matter how old I get, I'll still be your little girl
well now your little girl misses you

What happened Daddy?
your sitting next to me
but something feels wrong
it's as if you just stopped loving me
with this thought is when the scared child in me comes out

I want to be able to run and hug you
just rock back and forth in your arms again
so please don't push me away anymore
I need your comfort now more than ever

Please come back to me Daddy
I don't know what I did
but please just tell me
and then tell me you love me again
I miss that

Your here with me
but you don't want me
why Daddy? Please just let me hug you once
and please tell me- where did you go?

Author notes

Yea i miss the real you Dad.
Written August 24th, 2005

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  • bleedingarms
    August 24, 2005
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    aww thanks sweetie! i love ya too! byes

  • bleedingarms
    August 24, 2005
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    thanks so much! I hope what your going through gets resolved! take care and thanks for the applause!


  • BabyLove
    August 24, 2005
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    wow i really like this... i feel some thing like this.. only it is a lil diff. then u mean i think but both ways i am sure such.. gr8 write... beautiful!


  • hockey-princess
    August 24, 2005
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    hey girl! aww this is sad but great! keep writing love ya!

  • bleedingarms
    August 24, 2005
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    Aww thanks, i appreciate that, and i hope things get better with you and your Dad! take care! ~kiersten~

  • flowerpower1220
    August 24, 2005
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    this poem is so great!its so sweet it actully made me cry.me an my dad are fighting right now to,but i doubt its anything compared to ur situation.i hope everything turns out ok!great write

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