I long for that long lost feeling
And search for the pendulum of thought vs. reason
But all I find is a gold locket never worn
To me every day is Saturday
Do you give life to the untitled
With the life of death and the death of life
Distractable, inconceivable
This eternity, sweet eternity
Living inside parenthesis
Through curiosity and conformity
My existing adolescence
Sends me to Zeta Reticuli
To waste asking why
To paint a portrait where pieces fall
Freedom to the tortured soul
Arrives in the form of dust and scratches
The shadows call, but not to me
They call to whom is not known
The mirrored glass will stand over the scars of the crawling shadows
And the diamonds realizing desperate repetitions will reign on high
My imposing neurosis will steal my last breath
And the advice of the ageless will leave me awestruck
The conversions of the harlot
Will secure Epoch's awakening
Author notes
This is a poem consisting of some of my titles of other peoms of mine. The titles are That Long Lost Feeling, The Pendulum of Thought vs. Reason, A Gold Locket Never Worn, Saturdays, Untitled, Life of Death and Death of Life, Distractable Inconcievable, Eternity Sweet Eternity, Living Inside Parenthesis, Curiousity and Conformity, Adolescence, Zeta Reticuli, To Waste Asking Why, Portrait, Pieces Fall, Freedom tot he Tortured Soul, Dust and Scratches, Shadows, To Whom is Not Known, The Mirrored Glass, Stand, Scars of The Crawling Shadows, Diamonds, Realizing Desperate Conversations, and Reign On High. I have a lot more titles, so maybe sometime I'll write a second part.
Written August 24th, 2005
A contest entry
- Winning Words by aslanlight.
300 points, ended August 27, 2005, 5 entries
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Do you give life to the untitled
With the life of death and the death of life
Distractable, inconceivable
This eternity, sweet eternity THIS IS MY FAV. line i loved this poem it really is AWSOME ! -
I wish I could understand this more accurately because I'm sure there is wisdom and truth here but I'm afraid that it's a little too obscure for me. I can see you have much talent and an exellent vocabulary.
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this is a deep and intreging piece here I have read it twice and enjoyed it more the second time Good luck in the contest and keep up the good writes
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This is truly profound and I shall have to read it again more thoroughly. One question for now, who is Zeta Reticuli?
I can see you put a lot of thought and effort into this so thanks for taking the time and for putting all your titles in the authors comments.
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