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Blue Revelations

When the End Of Days finally comes
The sky will still be blue
Unsuspecting and inconspicuous

On the Day Before Eternity
The waters of Earth will still be blue
Restless as always

When the Day That Ends All Days arrives
The blood in our veins will remain blue
Until it is spilled

During the Day Of Eternal Fate
Feelings will still run blue
Even before the conclusion is realized

And after the Day Of Revelations
The only existence will be blue
An Eternal Blue

Author notes

To me, blue has always meant eternity. Blue is the color of life, as I've tried to convey in my poem. The sky, waters, our very blood, feelings, it's all blue. So givent htat blue is the color to life, it just seems to me blue would be the color of the end of life, hence Blue Revelations. For those who may not know, Revelations is another word for Armaggedon. Obviously, blue is my favorite color.
Written August 24th, 2005

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  • BonnieQ silver member
    January 10, 2006
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    Excellent Truth

    Once again, Joshua, you impress me with the depth of your writing; and, since much of my work is Biblical prophecy, I found this exquisite piece fascinating in its level of truth. Indeed, on the day Christ takes up His sheep, it will be to the majority as any other day: their mistake in not accepting the signs given and present since 1991. Well done, poet!

    Love and hugs, B♥nnieQ