Light slips 'round ageless trees
Shadows dance on whispered breeze
Fairy's choose to gather here
Tempting mortals straying near
Look carefully, as fairy's hide
And wait for believers to come inside
Keeping them for a year and day
or longer if they wish to stay
Ethereal magic fills this place
Tread carefully throughout their space
As nature's guardians, they defend
Fairy's protect both home and Friend
While caring for the earth each day
Mischief and pranks are their way
To remind common man of their power
As they enchant day and evening hour
So leave a gift for fairy folk
Underneath the tallest oak
And, only, if you believe... then
Can you enter the fairy world
Author notes
"The imagination has no limits."
A contest entry
- Fairytales by Samcat.
1000 points, ended July 20, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - It's All About the Rhyme by BlackSwan.
600 points, ended July 27, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Wonderful, inspiring, beautiful masterpiece! I loved this write, well done ^-^
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and agaihn
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great job agao
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how this is great love it I love fairys I love it yay we shold go down the fairy world to gether omg but yeah I love it very good wright
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I relly enjoyed the short fantasy I had while I read this. The imagery was lovely. thanks for entering
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oooh, okay, I have to admit, I have a profound weakness for the fae folk, and yes, I always leave little offerings of honey and wine...I love how your poem moves at a sweet, quick clip, the flow and rhyme are flawless, and I love the tale your weave, this should totally be in a childrens book of poems.
Thanks so much for sharing this, and for taking the time to enter my contest,
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luv it.
luv the words used
i luv faires.
i luv how it talked bout caring for the environment or w/e.
i just absolutely luv it.
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i love fairies. they are so beautiful, mischievious and wonderful<~~~~over look misspelling and typoes, tired. anyways, great piece, i loved reading it.
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This pull me right into a world filled with such cute and sweet faries. It's quite the magical piece and I truly enjoyed reading this. Thanks for entering and good luck
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This is a very well written poem, You have lots of talent. Good luck in my contest.
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beautiful poem, I absolutely love the rhyming, since I have no rhyming talent at all. I can almost see the fairies flying around the oak tree, playing pranks and such. This is just amazing. I really enjoy reading your work. Keep up the beautiful work and I shall always come and read it.
Wonderful poem, Queen, just wonderful
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This is awesome!!! I love fairys!! Great imagery in this mystical world- Really a great write!!!!!
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This was fantastic! exactly what I've been looking for! Great poem and the flow/rhyming was great! I liked the story you've layed out and it's just so sweet! Great work and thank you soooo much for entering my contest, you've a great chance!!!
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this is a very good poem i enjoyed the read i hope you win the contest wit this it deserves it *aplauds*
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this is a really well written piece, bringing in all the intricate and playful world of fairies, i really enjoyed reading this
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