Your love courses through me like blood through my veins,
You’re my greatest passion yet you bring me so much pain,
You lied and deceived me,I cannot stand your face,
This hatred I feel you can never replace
Yet my body still aches in pure desire for you,
This yearning bleeds into my soul,
I have no reason to need you this much,
But with you I just have no control
I can no longer look into your deceiptful eyes,
It’s my trust that you take as your smile through your lies,
Yet my love for you breaks through these tears that I cry,
I just cannot resist you so why even try,
At night when I dream it’s only your face I see,
I am chained by your love and I cannot break free,
Do you feel the same, can you hear my cries,
Can you hear me scream from your sickness and lies
My love has no limits yet my pain has no end,
But if I had a choice I would do it all again,
For just one night in your arms, one caress of your hand,
One brush of your lips just to know you’re my man
So take my love baby, do with it what you please
I am captured by you and I just don’t want to leave
Author notes
Written August 24th, 2005
A contest entry
- Love and lust: Perfect combinations (A contest) by snafu.
300 points, ended August 31, 2005, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank you. This is from PERSONAL experience. Actually an experience I am experiencing right at this very moment. So, it was very easy to write. I saw you contest and I was like --Ohh yeahh..this one is for me. Anyway - thanks for the nice comment. It was much appreciated. Good luck judging. I just judged my 3rd and it was difficult choosing the winners..BTW - been to England twice - loved it - still couldnt make those darn guards laugh though..
anywhoo - I'll stop rambling now.....cheers
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Absolultely spot on. You have captured this completely, just in the last stanza, you'd do it again. I don't matter how hurt, how bad it got, we'd still go back at the drop of a hat, wanting to feel that they're ours. Thanks for entering and good luck.
Snafu -
I love the line: My love has no limits and my pain has no end. One of the hardest pains for the heart to endure is the pain stemming from love. You have captured that well in this write with great show of emotion. I loved it, thanks for sharing this.
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