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( words that made me cry )

I'm staring at this screen with tears running down my face thinking I have been there and still, still there, fighting a battle that seems useless

Useless it may seem being nice and loving to someone that has hate and violence towards the world, kicking you in the teeth because you say hello

"Influences beyond control” take hold and corrupt the very innocence of one's mind

The best people in this world are the people that fight the corruption of innocence, the people that smile and care, loving people not ignorant and power hungry rich sarcastic bumbling fools

Bullies that like to bully innocents

Life starts when you're born, corruption also takes toll

Look through a child's eyes and see what they see,  pure innocents until they run into a wall, what affect does that wall have, wall meaning bad experiences, I think you understand

Children are bullied and consequences affect not just one but many

Poor Tom has been bullied by a bully that don't care, Tom rides the bus home, doesn't say hello to mother, mother is upset tells father and father tells mates of his concerns, mates just criticise and sarcastic remarks

You lost in the confusion I have caused, when somebody bits your head off for whatever reason they do, think do they have a son named Tom, ignorant people have a reason to be ignorant, the way to their heart is understanding their ways and their past what made them the way they see

Now for you is you and a beautiful you you are with that kind heart that makes the world a better place despite your worries you shine bright, brighter than most I have seen, live life to give life to those that have been misled by uncontrollable things

I see you're pain as tears run down, i understand and wished to say when you are down remember their innocence and not their ignorance for you are kind and a lovable person so don't let society corrupt that beautiful you that light shining above the rest, shining so bright that will be you

There is one more thing that maybe you should know, talking to the man on the moon helps wonders because no ignorance there, the moon man  will listen and understand for he will not pass judgement because that innocent moon tells no lies

If you ever need to talk I am always here, I am kind and understanding and look at the person for whom they really are not at that outer shell nor their anger or ignorance, there believes, but within, that pounding heart they have however corrupt

There is some truly amazing people out there and I know you are one of them, you are among the best remember and don't be corrupted

Love Sol
xXx

Author notes

you don't know me, I wondered around found what I thought I wanted to find but I am glad I was wrong because I have found something more precious and beautiful then a contest, I found that you like a lot of us unseen stars, stars that are not seen by the ignorance and corruption of this world
Written August 24th, 2005

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  • unique-n-flawed
    December 9, 2006
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    wow this is deep it was a good read


    • sol man uk
      December 10, 2006
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      yeah

      aw I forgot what I wrote, I think I will read, aww yeah sol<< wipes tear from face

  • sol man uk
    August 28, 2005
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    human behaviour is a fascinating subject and for somebody to understand they need to have lived life so all you budding psychiatrists/ psychologists out there go and do something you wouldn't dream of doing, guaranteed you would have a better outlook on life

  • sol man uk
    August 28, 2005
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    walking amongst the leaves

    they are out there, they are hiding in amongst the trees, its very hard to judge people to see what they are really like, their outer shell can be misleading, I'm a very good judge of character and you are that star and that wondrous light, we are out there somewhere amongst the trees lol


  • Calentice
    August 28, 2005
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    you know this contest has helped me so much. I must say if it wasn't for this contest I wouldn't have met you and one other person that have helped lift me up. Thank you for such kind words. it is wonderful to know there are still people that care. thank you so much.
    Blessed be
    Calentice


  • sol man uk
    August 24, 2005
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    I tapped on the wall for I am a ghost

    please don't judge this, this is for you and doesn't need to be judged

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