I'm staring at this screen with tears running down my face thinking I have been there and still, still there, fighting a battle that seems useless
Useless it may seem being nice and loving to someone that has hate and violence towards the world, kicking you in the teeth because you say hello
"Influences beyond control” take hold and corrupt the very innocence of one's mind
The best people in this world are the people that fight the corruption of innocence, the people that smile and care, loving people not ignorant and power hungry rich sarcastic bumbling fools
Bullies that like to bully innocents
Life starts when you're born, corruption also takes toll
Look through a child's eyes and see what they see, pure innocents until they run into a wall, what affect does that wall have, wall meaning bad experiences, I think you understand
Children are bullied and consequences affect not just one but many
Poor Tom has been bullied by a bully that don't care, Tom rides the bus home, doesn't say hello to mother, mother is upset tells father and father tells mates of his concerns, mates just criticise and sarcastic remarks
You lost in the confusion I have caused, when somebody bits your head off for whatever reason they do, think do they have a son named Tom, ignorant people have a reason to be ignorant, the way to their heart is understanding their ways and their past what made them the way they see
Now for you is you and a beautiful you you are with that kind heart that makes the world a better place despite your worries you shine bright, brighter than most I have seen, live life to give life to those that have been misled by uncontrollable things
I see you're pain as tears run down, i understand and wished to say when you are down remember their innocence and not their ignorance for you are kind and a lovable person so don't let society corrupt that beautiful you that light shining above the rest, shining so bright that will be you
There is one more thing that maybe you should know, talking to the man on the moon helps wonders because no ignorance there, the moon man will listen and understand for he will not pass judgement because that innocent moon tells no lies
If you ever need to talk I am always here, I am kind and understanding and look at the person for whom they really are not at that outer shell nor their anger or ignorance, there believes, but within, that pounding heart they have however corrupt
There is some truly amazing people out there and I know you are one of them, you are among the best remember and don't be corrupted
Love Sol
xXx
Useless it may seem being nice and loving to someone that has hate and violence towards the world, kicking you in the teeth because you say hello
"Influences beyond control” take hold and corrupt the very innocence of one's mind
The best people in this world are the people that fight the corruption of innocence, the people that smile and care, loving people not ignorant and power hungry rich sarcastic bumbling fools
Bullies that like to bully innocents
Life starts when you're born, corruption also takes toll
Look through a child's eyes and see what they see, pure innocents until they run into a wall, what affect does that wall have, wall meaning bad experiences, I think you understand
Children are bullied and consequences affect not just one but many
Poor Tom has been bullied by a bully that don't care, Tom rides the bus home, doesn't say hello to mother, mother is upset tells father and father tells mates of his concerns, mates just criticise and sarcastic remarks
You lost in the confusion I have caused, when somebody bits your head off for whatever reason they do, think do they have a son named Tom, ignorant people have a reason to be ignorant, the way to their heart is understanding their ways and their past what made them the way they see
Now for you is you and a beautiful you you are with that kind heart that makes the world a better place despite your worries you shine bright, brighter than most I have seen, live life to give life to those that have been misled by uncontrollable things
I see you're pain as tears run down, i understand and wished to say when you are down remember their innocence and not their ignorance for you are kind and a lovable person so don't let society corrupt that beautiful you that light shining above the rest, shining so bright that will be you
There is one more thing that maybe you should know, talking to the man on the moon helps wonders because no ignorance there, the moon man will listen and understand for he will not pass judgement because that innocent moon tells no lies
If you ever need to talk I am always here, I am kind and understanding and look at the person for whom they really are not at that outer shell nor their anger or ignorance, there believes, but within, that pounding heart they have however corrupt
There is some truly amazing people out there and I know you are one of them, you are among the best remember and don't be corrupted
Love Sol
xXx
Author notes
you don't know me, I wondered around found what I thought I wanted to find but I am glad I was wrong because I have found something more precious and beautiful then a contest, I found that you like a lot of us unseen stars, stars that are not seen by the ignorance and corruption of this world 
Written August 24th, 2005
A contest entry
- Life of Inspiration by Calentice.
600 points, ended August 28, 2005, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow this is deep it was a good read


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aw I forgot what I wrote, I think I will read, aww yeah sol<< wipes tear from face
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human behaviour is a fascinating subject and for somebody to understand they need to have lived life so all you budding psychiatrists/ psychologists out there go and do something you wouldn't dream of doing, guaranteed you would have a better outlook on life
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walking amongst the leaves
they are out there, they are hiding in amongst the trees, its very hard to judge people to see what they are really like, their outer shell can be misleading, I'm a very good judge of character and you are that star and that wondrous light, we are out there somewhere amongst the trees lol -
you know this contest has helped me so much. I must say if it wasn't for this contest I wouldn't have met you and one other person that have helped lift me up. Thank you for such kind words. it is wonderful to know there are still people that care. thank you so much.
Blessed be
Calentice -
I tapped on the wall for I am a ghost
please don't judge this, this is for you and doesn't need to be judged
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