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Guitar string sex

You bend
sway
like caught
in ocean waves
rythmic
fingers flaying
over vibrating
guitar strings
Your face contorts
your voice
rises

The music you give
birth
to reminds me
of
sex.

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Written August 23rd, 2005

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  • EPoD
    March 24, 2007

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    Hah I never thought of it that way before. Making music is such a passionate thing however, much like sex. Great write

  • Faery of death
    September 14, 2005
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    Amazing my beauty, could it have been any more beautiful?

  • caus-a-lil-riot
    August 23, 2005
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    i love it!!!!!! extremely fabulous....great work i love your writing keep it up!!! best wishes