Once I thought you were nice
Once I thought you actually like me
But what the hell are you doing?
You have no right at all
Telling people I'm something that I'm not!
You have No Heart...
You probably don't even have a Soul!
Mark, if you just knew...
You want me to suffer
You want me to be hated
You want me to be miserible
But you know that you won't get your ways
Even if you hurt me
You won't win my heart for death
Or losing my heart for caring!
Mark, all the things
I thought of you..
Damn, you just lost all of me..
Not even a cent could get you back to me!
You have lied to me
And to your own friends
Especially, your brother...
What is up with you?
Why can't you learn for the good?
Mark, I would have given you a chance
To opportunity to change just to feel
That you have a good person in you!
You lied to yourself...
You don't like me..
You just played with me!!
One word to describe you is
You are a "Piece-of-Shit"
Don't come into my life!
Author notes
~!~!~This poem is about my exx crush.. what a moron
I'm just pissed with him!! This is true poem.. a lot of emotion on this.. Some sadness, Anger, Lust, etc.!!! Hope you all liked it
~!~!~
"blasphemy"
Written August 23rd, 2005
A contest entry
- Inspiration please! anything goes! by woman onamision.
650 points, ended February 25, 2006, 59 entries
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a lot of anger indeed. I must say, mostly i think anger. nice job and keep writing.
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Gah! Angst! lol I can definitely tell this is a personal write, no one can make up that kind of frustration/anger. I like how you address your ex crushes name in the poem too, it gives a powerful touch to the piece. Good job
Megs
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Thank you for commenting Timothy
And also thank you for putting your pen on
God Bless!
oxoxoxoxo
~Have a lil Faith~ Sedusha
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Hey there bloody girl ( Like the name..hehe).. Thank you for the claps and commenting I'm sry what has happened to you
I wish you the best! The guy didn't take advantage on me, but that he hurt me emotional of play with my heart♥
Not sex! But I am sry by what cody did to you it was very disrespectful!!
God Bless! **Have a lil Faith**
oxoxoxoxo Sedusha
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Good!
I know for myself, I always enjoy penning something to vent, or create something from the emotions I have within me, and you've done that well here...Nice job with expressing your feeling...Thanks for sharing, pen on!
-Timothy
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Bravo!
i know how you feel.this one guy named cody used me for my body. he always acted as if he loved me for who i am. but instead he only wanted my body so i fell for that and he got my body. so i want to let you know there are people out there who feel the ame way
great write i love the ending.
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Wahey, you go girl! Thanks for the sweet things you said in your Author's comments box ^.^
Lovely poem, well done! Thanks for entering and take care
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you got him good he deserves every word said i that poem
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RIght on Chi Chi Right on he is a piece of shit
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Yeah, well who knows
... He probably doesn't know what he deserves anymore ...
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wow, this poem holy cow, lots of anger hopefully mark will read it he deserves everything you said.
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