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This falls under children or love....
Written August 23rd, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Shape poetry any theme you like any topic by Entwining Beauty.
300 points, ended July 22, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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O.k. now this is my favorite one for sure! I love teddy bears... he looks all warm and snuggly! Wowsers! You have an exceptional talent for this my dear! I love it! I love it! Hugz,
Frogz~
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Yay you liked yippie...Maybe sometime ill send you a teddy bear you, James, Klassy and I all like bears we have that in common. Thanks so much hugs, Sherry ♥
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You are so sweet to read my shapes thank you.
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Once again a great poem Sherry and a lovely little poem
to go with this cute little Teddy Bear thanks for sharing
and thanks for making me smile
love and LIght
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A fun poem Sherry and a pleasant one to read...I adore teddies and feel like I could just give this one a nice big cuddle...you managed to keep the body shape perfectly...
The poem reads well befitting a teddy, in fact the first two lines give the strength, a fine beginning
nice entry, thank you..
~Lilac~
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Hi and welcome
~Lilac~
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maybe you're right! Afterall, I'm 32 this year
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But I'm not that old yet? LOL well just no your special to me for now and sure I can be the ap grandma but ya sis ill be in real life. Ok for now ill be the grandma yes I must be getting wrinkles a old woman lol guess I'll find some age hidden make up. LOL!!!
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You know..you would be my gramma because patty's my mom...
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Hi sis, Sure thats fine I have a few shapes in a collection on my page if you like to see them sometime or get a chance. I'm glad you enjoyed this and your welcome.
Me
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This was totally precious!!! I love it!! It really made me smile. I would love to put this on my desktop at home, may I. It will only be for me and your name will be with the image. Let me know. Thanks so much for entering this!!
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great poem
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Wow. Amazing.
Ok...winner here. Just precious. You ladies! You have it naturally!
Really very sweet. She's just gonna MELT.
Nice job Sherry, and so clever!
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This is just darling. I love the way you have made your poem into a teddy bear. I'm sure this will delight Violet. Hugs, Patricia
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Thanks, Mom. I'll be commenting on all entries at the time the contest closes. Hugs, Patricia
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Thanks for your comment glad you enjoyed it dear. Me~
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My son is attatched to his bear named -Mike, of course after his dad. Girl I spent 38.00 for my son to have this bear. I took him to the mall where he could stuff it -so to speak- hisself, Cute, but was pricy for a little bear. Koodles To your Poem!
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Thanks so much.
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Aww this is so sweet and I love the little teddy bear around the words. You did an amazing job on this poem. I really appreciate you entering the contest and following the rules.
kahy
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So ya liked the bear huh great lol thanks. ♥
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TEDDY!!! i like teddys lol great write! it was very cute!!
~Turtle
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Thank you Kelly, Seeing you back here is better then
a long island ice-tea it fills my heart with refreshment.
Love ya! ♥
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Warm and fuzzy!
This is such a warm, fuzzy write coupled with the warmth and joy friendship brings. Well done, Sherry! Adorable too! Like you . . . --Kel
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Thank you
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This is cute.. Good luck in the contest
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You still have the yellow bear? Thank you. Sherry
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This is great Sherry! And Yellow Bear and I as a child traveled a thousand miles.~~Suseann
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I love teddy bears and this is a really sweet poem I think you misunderstood the contest though
What I meant was form poetry....As in, Sonnets, Cinquains etc...I was scared somebody will mistake it for shape poetry Anyways. thanks for sharing!
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~Lana
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Thanks for your nice comment..
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this is a treat to read i have a teddy bear my uncle gave me when i was just a newborn and i'm not 49. the guy is missing fuzz and eyes (the bear not the uncle) and holds a place of honor in the bedroom. when i feel really bad he's who i hold when i cry... that bear knows more secrets
thanks for entering and best of luck!
very creative shaping this poem too
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