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Ribbons

Spools and discs
                   
Yards and inches
                                     
Thick and thin
                                                         
Silk and satin
                                                 
Felt and velvet

Rough and soft

Loopy and lacy

Dark and bright

Fuzzy and furry
                         
Ugly and beautiful

Embroidered and colourful

Opaque and translucent

Streaming and flowing

Stiff and flexible

Silver and gold

Livid and vivid

Vibrant and liquid



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Colours of this and colours of that!



Ribbons



From corner to corner
Covering the walls
and covering the shelves


Filling the room
From ceiling
to floor


Ribbons and ribbons and ribbons galore!

Ribbons and ribbons and ribbons and more!




Ribbons




August 20th, 21st, and 23rd, of 2005


Author notes

-Written August 20th 21st and 23rd........2005.......
-RIBBONSSSSSSSSSSSSSSs!!!!!!!!!!hope you enjoy!!!
-REN
-(I might add more)
Written August 23rd, 2005

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  • enymatik90-09
    August 25, 2005
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    lol.....you're really funny! Nice to hear from you again! lol

    ENY

  • Gosia
    August 25, 2005
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    AHHHHH!! RIBBON OVERLOAD!!

    this is cool, although rather scary. I'm a bit scared about this sudden abundance of ribbons though! And a room? FULL of ribbons? *faints*


  • enymatik90-09
    August 24, 2005
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    ok.....thanx for telling me about me mistake though


  • autopsy report
    August 24, 2005
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    You put livid and vivid twice. I didn't really like this piece. Sors.


  • enymatik90-09
    August 23, 2005
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    Thanx! Glad you liked it!

    ENY


  • DrowningInSolitude
    August 23, 2005
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    This is a great write !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it !!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep it up !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    ~Britt~

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