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Being A Teddy

Sometimes I feel like a teddy bear,
To give people love and care,
Everybody comes to talk,
Then leave me by there smelly sock.

Alone on the bed I sit and dwell,
On the pain I know so well
The teddy bears don't have bears,
To give them Tender Loving Care.

But I'm a different type of teddy,
who doesn't just lie still and steady,
I have my own gorgeous bear,
Who gives me love and the upmost care.

Author notes

Ok, not exactly radical love but there is to types of love incorporated! That's radical... well for me to think that much about anything!!
Written August 23rd, 2005

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  • Mythtress
    October 21, 2005
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    Awww...this is sweet. Somehow, I expected something more dark and depressing from a poet with the name of "darkangel666". I like the "in your face" twist to the end of this. Great job. Write on, poet.

  • Time focus on Me
    October 11, 2005
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    Wow... This is is an awesome poem that you have done here. Keep up the good work and talent. and I love the poem.


  • Brandy3 gold member
    August 23, 2005
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    This poem is cute and outreaching showing what so many outsiders do,hurt you.I know how you feel I've been left behind over and over and I know it hurts.Good words with your rhyming,keep writting.
    Brandy3