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Always

The honesty of your words
frightens me
The depths of your devotions
surprises me
The passion in your eyes
pierces my hearts deepest desires
The tenderness of your touch
covers my body with goose flesh
The warmth of your embrace
engulfs all that I am
The fire from your kiss
ignites my soul
The completion of our souls joining
satisfies me
From now to eternity,
We are one
Always....

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Written August 23rd, 2005

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  • Celticmoon
    August 24, 2005
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    Thank you once again Much appreciated!

  • Brokenpen
    August 24, 2005
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    amazing

    wow this was really good .. i like your way of letting it all out... your style flows so well.. great write thank you for shearing it with us all.


  • Celticmoon
    August 24, 2005
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    Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed it.....


  • August 24, 2005
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    Beautiful expressive verse this one has a warmth and love that abounds the pages.


  • Millie Music
    August 23, 2005
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    Ohh this is preety,
    and i love the picture,
    i think this poem is untouchable,
    love it xxx
    love melsia

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