Here we lie....
North, East,
South and West.....divided
Once together, once strong
Ripped away from one another
Ununited we fall
It came without warning
Attacked us all
Evil, vicious, and manipulating
Yet, cunning and sweet
Fooled us all
Beliveing it was true
Justice and a friend to us all
When indeed
Nothing more than a demon
From hell
Hiding...
Waiting to destroy all
Blinded by darkness....
We stood alone
Clawing our way back....
Together
The demon in the center
We stand united
Once again
Surrounding the evil
North, East, South and West
Sworn to bind it....
Sworn to banish it
The battle was long
But united we surpass all
Now once again
Standing strong
Bonded by friendship
We are the "Warriors"
Strong and proud....
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Written August 23rd, 2005
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cool poem, it was quick to read but really interesting.
Good work.
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Yeah we need some victory. There is too much warring going on and this poem is definitely a tribute to that. -
Oh please feel free to speak. Do not hush.... please tell me what does it remind you of?
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Excellent!
This speaks with emotions deep, I can think of what this reminds me of, but I'll keep my yap shut...Great choise of words once again, you express yourself perfectly, and know you do have a way with this.
Another great, and yes, truly powerful penned piece! Keep it up, and thanks for sharing you! 
Much love always!
-Timothy The Poetic Weaver
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awesome
this is awesome! powerful words we need here in the USA..
perfect rhythm..
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