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Me, Myself, and I

No kiss goodnight
No arms to hold me
No one to share my dreams
No one in my bed beside me

No smile to welcome me home
No fingertips to wipe away my tears
No tender words to calm my soul
Nothing but darkness surrounds me

No gentle touch to caress me
No eyes to lock with mine
No laugh to share my jokes
Nothing but loneliness

No one to create memories with
No healing hands to help me when ill
No passion to burn with mine
Nothing but burning desires unfulfilled

No love to fill my heart
No emotions left inside me
No escape from my one person hell
Nothing but me, myself and I

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Written August 23rd, 2005

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    August 23, 2005
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    Powerful/Well Expressed!

    Awe, hun, this makes me wanna cry, wait, I am crying... This make me now wanna stop crying... I only wish the best for sweet souls like yourself, no-one so loving and giving of their hearts should remain lonely...but I'm afraid I see it all the time....I wish I could make more of myself, because love is one thing I don't lack, and I could spread it around like wild fire...lol.... But I am one, and my words from the heart that beats inside me I offer...in hopes to mend some broken hearts and souls...THanks for openning up, this moved me....

    -Timothy The Poetic Weaver~


  • August 23, 2005
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    Flows well the angst of lonliness is conveyed in this one I like the art choice also. You have written a very well executed poem.